When I read about what happened to Hassan after the kite-fighting contest, I was shocked. It was completely unexpected, and my heart was breaking for poor little Hassan. I was so mad at you for not going and helping him while the older boys were hurting him. I couldn't believe that you didn't, after all he does for you. He has been nothing but a loyal, trustworthy, loving best friend-more like brother. And now, what do you do, but act like nothing happened and that you didn't see him getting hurt in the alley. You pretended to not be there. I was so frustrated with you. But, I think I can guess why you didn't go and stand up for him. It's just because you two are of different backgrounds and religions. But still, I don't understand this. He loves you as a brother, and you should love him as much as he loves you. In my opinion, you are so stubborn and full of pride that you can't even acknowledge that you even know him, let alone admit that he has been like your brother for the past twelve years. I wish that differences like the ones you two have didn't matter to anyone, that we could all accept each other for what we truly are. I think there would be less problems in all of the world if we accepted our differences. Think about it. It's the only reason for the United States and the Middle East being at war right now, and the only reason for there being disagreements among countries. Differences. I think that you could have and should have been a bigger person and stood up for Hassan because he is all you have. Everyone has the power to do things like that, but we don't because we are selfish and full of pride. I wish the world could change, but I know that's not realistic.
Can't wait to keep reading your story.
Emma
